Well, the pencil work it´s really awesome, wonderful style, The face it´s great, very nice! But i see a bit big the head, the frontal zone of the skull. Just a bit, but see strange. However, it´s a wonderful work!

hmm, I don't think the head is too big. I think the lack of textures/details there is why it looks that way it's too old though, i'll probably not change it. thank you for pointing it out though you have a sharp eye.

I think it fits well with the described character. The head looks fine to me.
Composition is a bit tight from left and top.
Good job.

Nice work in the rendering. Looks a bit unfinished though (bottom).

Roadrunner: thank you i'm glad you appreciate how i did the head.
purplerose: yeah, this was a quick piece, so it doesn't have that polished look. i decided to leave it rough.
thanks for the comments!

Nice style!
I like the eyes expression

Really fits to the character. Roadrunner said it.
Check the ear. I would have had shown a little of his right shoulder.
Very good work on his face.

Very nice drawing!....good work Mariam!
Carlos

Very expressive portrait, really great.

Maybe his head is too round.. Cause the face is great,with expression,it's alive - I can watch him in the eyes,but when I'm scrolling up to his round skull I'm loosing this illusion. Great drawing anyway and interesting subject

The face is wonderful.
Good work

herrwestphal: I decided to keep out the shoulder to avoid breaking the composition. I think it would've made that long contour of the back look strange, because then I would have to add more details to the body to avoid having it look completely empty. thank you for checking it out
curly: well, I figured that head might add a hint of something disturbing to this and maybe even fit well with his personality, which is what I tried to capture in this so therefore it's not a 'normal' skull, and the shading is quite light to make it look even more bubbly and big thank you for the compliments and for coming by
Pedro, Carlos, Maidith, Mary: thank you! much appreciated

killer face.... nice drawing!

Nice drawing!

Hi, nice to see you're still up here and working with your great stuff! And I've noticed that you changed your user name... btw, I liked your pencil work here, specially the eyes! Great stuff, keep it up!

• ronn

hi Ronn thanks!
MaiteGoitia, androx3k: thank you!

The ear feels a little flat.

Shading is great! Nice expression on the face.

Great anatomy!
I love the shades also!
keep it up

Great work! agree about the skull though
but the face itself looks very good

Good work! I'm impressed by the eyes and the mouth.