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Miss Serenity

Miss Serenity

Photography Photography \ Figure | 07/02/08 @663 | killadore | Comments critiques (24) | Views views (435)


Miss Serenity
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Photo: me
Makeup & hair: me
Model: Katrine (http://nevermoria.deviantart.com)
Almost no post work

There was a burnt down house lying at the side of the road which I noticed on my way to the university once. So we packed our stuff today and headed out on an adventure.
More from the series coming soon!
 
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Avatar Byonder

 07/02/08 @712

Cool location, and outfit. Interesting pose (thumbup) Not really crazy about the pearls or the composition -- the model don't really seem at all integrated into the location. Looking forward to the rest of the series :)
 
Avatar Madanapale

 07/02/08 @751

Hi Mariam!.....good idea....very nice and surreal mood!
The lighting works well for me, it goes with the mood.
Love the title.
Carlos
 
Avatar mabdelfatah

 07/02/08 @769

very very nice, i like everything about this pic
 
Avatar tanjir

 07/02/08 @793

awesome :)... agree with carlos.
 
Avatar killadore

 07/02/08 @795

Thanks for the comment, Brandon :) appreciate it. Well, I managed to put together the acessories/hair/makeup after something like 3 hours of sleep, so honestly, it could be worse! :p
Carlos, Mohamed, Tanjir, thank you for the comments :) nice of you to check it out!
 
Avatar Roadrunner

 07/02/08 @823

Good to see you experimenting. I am okay with the make up. I also like the green-blue cast that I guess is intentional. I would like to see a stronger composition. I hope you have one in the other shots. :)
 
Avatar Vasco

 07/02/08 @911

Great work! Reminded me of Serenity from Godsmack http://br.youtube.com/watch?v=3ov4Z3dj3nQ&feature=related
 
Avatar killadore

 07/02/08 @941

What an excellent song, Vasco! I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks for stoppin' by
Roadrunner: Well, I hope so :p Thanks for the crit.
 
Avatar Sven

 07/03/08 @408

+Good model
+Pose
+lighting

  • Roof is distracting
Ill be waiting for the next part (thumbup)
 
Avatar cupcake

 07/03/08 @534

Wonderful Idea and Execution.
:)
 
Avatar LoStSidE

 07/03/08 @543

not realy my taste, don't like composition, light or perspective.
 
Avatar L-aura

 07/03/08 @768

Agree with above observations;)
I like the lighting and tones!
 
Avatar killadore

 07/04/08 @579

Sven, cupcake, L-aura: thanks for the comments/suggestions/votes! :)
LoStSodE: lol, well alright then...
 
Avatar Jafus

 07/05/08 @000

very nice pose mariam;)
agree with swen about roof!!
 
Avatar ARZILLIER66

 07/05/08 @042

Cool capture!:)
I like the pose, cool composition
nice mood
 
Avatar oldskool87

 07/05/08 @434

nice work :)
 
Avatar ThruMyEyez

 07/07/08 @049

I like the setting! Good lighting and interesting model. Well done!
 
Avatar twistoflime

 07/09/08 @619

I like the color mood and lighting. It would have been nice to see it without the pearls.
 
Avatar killadore

 07/09/08 @718

I still don't see why the pearls are a problem :p Her outfit and style isn't supposed to look like it was neatly put together for a typical commercial mag cover..but thanks for the input, twistoflime, and for taking the time to comment and vote
Jafus, ARZILLIER66, oldskool87, ThruMyEyez: thank you for checking it out :)

 
Avatar LoStSidE

 07/09/08 @798

the more i look the more i don't understand wy the high score, forgive me for this, and i think you have realy good photos in your portfolio, but i can't seem to understand this one, maby the problem is on me but let me state wy i don't find it appeling:

  • way to distracting bg, the perspective does not add to it because the roof seem to almost blend with the subject
  • so perspective is next thing i donīt like at all, too flat, too snapshot.
  • composition: centered, with no symetric value, no other element in that makes it stand out.
  • Light: the chest and left arm are completly overexposed.
  • Color: nothing special about it, plus the green cast that does not add at all imo to the photo.
  • Meaning, mood: I canīt find no real mood or meaning in the concept.
So analysing this from every possible way it remains just a bad snapshot. but then again it's just my opinion, and may i say again that i like most of your previouse works
 
Avatar moserArtist

 07/09/08 @860

Dito on Sven's comment.
 
Avatar killadore

 07/09/08 @886

LoStSidE: sorry man, I guess it's just a matter of taste. What can I say..some people find meaning in photos of water drops and others find meaning in photos of a screaming girl in a burnt down house. Thanks for the observations though.
moserArtist: thanks for the comment
 
Avatar LoStSidE

 07/09/08 @897

it is indeed as i said a matter of taste, hope you don't take it personal. :)
 
Avatar RvascoF

 07/10/08 @969

Not really my taste but its a god job, i like the pose and mood but the lighting could be improved...!!!
Well done....!!!
 
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GFXuser name:
   killadore
Full Name:
  Mariam Zakarian
Gender:
  Female
Birthdate:
  09/02/1987 (21)
Country:
  Denmark
Member since:
  06/22/2004

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